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IDEAS
✅May include abstract ideas & metaphors
✅Ideas are deeply explored
✅Strong focus on task & style
IDEAS
✅Ideas are explained appropriately
✅Maintains focus on the task
IDEAS
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Ideas relate to the task, but…No clear purpose in writing
Ideas are listed rather than explored
IDEAS
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❌ Incoherent or irrelevant ideas❌ Writing unrelated to the task
❌ No clear focus or structure
Vocabulary
✅ Enhances communication effectively
✅ Spelling is accurate for all basic words
Vocabulary
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✅ Some ambitious vocabulary✅ Avoids overly complex words
✅ Spelling mostly accurate
Vocabulary
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⚠️ Uses only basic vocabulary⚠️ Ambitious words misapplied
⚠️ Spelling errors in simple words
Vocabulary
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❌ Limited clarity in vocabulary❌ Frequent spelling mistakes
❌ Lacks variety in word choice
Grammar
✅ Consistent sentence structure
✅ Grammar errors are minimal
Grammar
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✅ Mostly accurate tenses✅ Minor grammar errors
✅ Readable sentence flow
Grammar
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⚠️ Inconsistent tenses⚠️ Sentence structure may be weak
⚠️ Grammar errors impact clarity
Grammar
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❌ Tenses are unclear or incorrect❌ Sentence structure is not clear
❌ Significant grammar issues
Structure
✅ Paragraphs used accurately
✅ Varied and effective sentences
✅ Logical flow between ideas
Structure
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✅ Communicates clearly✅ Paragraphs are present
✅ Some sentence variety
Structure
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⚠️ No clear paragraphing⚠️ Sentence structure may be incorrect
⚠️ Lacks logical progression
Structure
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❌ No paragraphs❌ No clear sentence structure
❌ Writing feels disorganized
Punctuation
✅ Creative use of punctuation
✅ Accurate use of commas, full stops, etc.
Punctuation
✅
✅ Limited punctuation used correctly✅ Mostly just full stops and commas
✅ Some variety in punctuation
Punctuation
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⚠️ Basic punctuation only⚠️ Errors in sentence demarcation
⚠️ Commas, apostrophes, etc., often missing
Punctuation
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❌ Very limited punctuation❌ Writing may lack full stops
❌ Sentence clarity is affected
Punctuation - Mark Scheme Examples
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❌ Band 4: Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit. Ut elit tellus, luctus nec ullamcorper mattis, pulvinar dapibus leo.
Punctuation
✅ Creative use of punctuation
✅ Accurate use of commas, full stops, etc.
Punctuation
⚠️
⚠️ Basic punctuation only⚠️ Errors in sentence demarcation
⚠️ Commas, apostrophes, etc., often missing
Punctuation
✅
✅ Limited punctuation used correctly✅ Mostly just full stops and commas
✅ Some variety in punctuation
Punctuation
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❌ Very limited punctuation❌ Writing may lack full stops
❌ Sentence clarity is affected
Punctuation - Mark Scheme Examples
Band 4
“As the sun set, a golden hue spread across the horizon, bathing the city in warmth. The bustling streets, filled with laughter and chatter, gradually quieted. The gentle breeze carried the scent of fresh flowers – a reminder of the beauty in simple moments.”
📝 Why is this Band 4?
- Uses varied punctuation (commas, dashes, and full stops effectively).
- Creative sentence structure enhances readability.
- Correct use of commas and apostrophes ensures clarity.
Band 3
“The sun set over the city, turning the sky orange. The streets were busy, people talking and laughing. As night fell, the noise died down, and the smell of flowers was in the air.”
📝 Why is this Band 3?
- Uses basic punctuation correctly (commas and full stops).
- Lacks varied punctuation styles (e.g., no dashes or semicolons).
- Simple sentence structures with some variety.
Band 2
“The sun set it was turning orange. The people talked laughed and walked. The flowers smell nice in the wind.”
📝 Why is this Band 2?
- Basic punctuation is missing or misused (no correct comma placement).
- Sentence demarcation errors (run-on sentences).
- Lacks variety in punctuation (missing apostrophes or proper sentence flow).
Band 1
❌ Band 1:
“The sun set the people talk it orange sky no stops or comma they laugh.”
📝 Why is this Band 1?
- No clear punctuation (missing full stops, commas, and sentence breaks).
- Sentence structure is unclear, affecting readability.
- Poor use of grammar and sentence flow.
Punctuation
✅ Creative use of punctuation
✅ Accurate use of commas, full stops, etc.
Punctuation
⚠️
⚠️ Basic punctuation only⚠️ Errors in sentence demarcation
⚠️ Commas, apostrophes, etc., often missing
Punctuation
✅
✅ Limited punctuation used correctly✅ Mostly just full stops and commas
✅ Some variety in punctuation
Punctuation
❌
❌ Very limited punctuation❌ Writing may lack full stops
❌ Sentence clarity is affected